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Nervous glances cast to catch your eye;
An anxious smile to try and melt the fears.
Your irises grin back against the sky.
Uneasy laughter fills my lungs and ears.

Though blushing, still the cold bites at my skin.
Too perfect to be anything but dreams…
I take a chance, and soon I’ve drawn you in –
My playful smirk under your gaze still gleams.

My delicate hands slowly inch along;
Another second gradually crawls by,
And in my heart I’m bursting with the song
Of pure emotion needing no reply.

And for a moment, we were locked in bliss
As for the first time lovers shared a kiss.
©2006-2009 ~Smartster
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Author's Comments

Alright, so I can't sleep without getting this out of my head first. ^^; I was inspired to attempt depicting the first time Jameson and I met in person by =darkmoon3636's 100 Themes Challenge. (Okay, so =darkmoon3636 found it in yet ANOTHER deviant's journal, but I still picked it up from hers!)

I'm not sure if I'll go through the whole list and write something on each of them (style depending) or not. Maybe if I get bored enough, who knows? I've been needing an excuse to write. :XD: So, without further ado, here is my attempt at redemption in the Shakespearean sonnet department; I hope reading about the shy first encounter between Jameson and myself makes you smile like the memory does for me. ^_^ :heart:

Edit: And here's where you can see the list of my 100 Themes' progress! [link]

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:iconstolen-dream:
;-; omg itmade me like cry!! it is beautiful! my favorite line is
Too perfect to be anything but dreams… wonderous simply womderous! :clap::+fav:

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I'm only human.
:iconsmartster:
:jawdrop:/:happycry: OMG! *can't find the right words* I like, love you right now! :glomp:/:hug:!

^^; I'd been thinking of giving it to him as a gift, and your comment just sealed the deal. Thank you so much!!!

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:heart: ~13lade6rip & ~Smartster :heart:
:iconstolen-dream:
:XD:/:X3: glad to help you out!! it is a simple awsome sonet!! you deserve praise!!! *praises you* :glopm: lub joo too! :hug:

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I'm only human.
:iconstolen-dream:
:boogie::boogie::fork::boogie::boogie:
.......................^:wtf:^

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I'm only human.
:iconsquirrels-are-evil:
hah yes! That's a great description of first time's love

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One is never dissappointed when you're a nihilist
:iconsmartster:
Thank you! ^_^ I'm really glad the story I was going for came through. =D

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:heart: ~13lade6rip & ~Smartster :heart:
:iconmatto-sensei:
Have you ever felt like your soul just shed a tear of joy? Yeah, it's kinda like that. (OMG TEH GREAT JOB!! NICE!)
:iconsmartster:
Well, it's how I felt just being around him. :blushes: So yeah, I think I know where you're coming from there. Thank you so much for the positive feedback! :glomp:

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:heart: ~13lade6rip & ~Smartster :heart:
:iconmatto-sensei:
Even reading this again, I felt the same way as I did the first time. SUCH a nice piece.

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